Honestly Crystal, I have no idea what this poem is about. But I'll try to comment. I believe this poem is about you and your lovers stage through the time you had together. You did a great job showinh the emotions at the beginning when two people fall in love. There is always a nervous feeling in both people. And as the story enfolds you seem to get more and more sad. Along the way you seem to have lost (them) by death or tbe relationship doesn't feel the same at all. The wording is fantastic though. I loved the addictions in the poem too because it does enhance the sadness you seem to write about. Losing a loved one makes you feel lost and alone and generally people cope with negative ways. The last stanza stood out to me because you always want to bide your time never wanting to wake up for the day and put on a happy face. Anyways, tbe story here is wonderful. Well done.

Such a powerful piece of poetry. Absolutely adore the word usage, it really gives that feeling of loss and longing, that ache that the heart feels through distance.
You are just amazing, and you write so beautifully, with so much emotion and conviction. Really lovely piece Crystal. Thanks for sharing :)
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WOW! This is such a powerful poem with so much truth behind it, I relate and feel this within my bones. Long distance is hard and I've been through it will always hold onto hope as well.. But enough about me.

You penned such a spot on poem with so much raw emotion in each stanza and each sentence within each word your heart and soul is heard pouring out your emotions.

I loved you how much let it go and expressed your feelings in a way that sparks the reader to envision all you've structured on this piece in such detail with so much power.

It is a true statement of beauty and strength to pen a poem with such emotion and vulnerability.

Excellent job!
Raw so very raw and an awesome poem.
Wish I could nominate. :)
5/5
Brought a tear to my eye.