This poem is very beautiful because it seems to based on your life :). And that gives a reader more of a connection and leaves you feeling like you are apart of it. There is so much you can say here as well. First of all the imagery gives you a picture and you can see thescene enfold. It seems like you are rremembering a great time in which you had with friends in your teenage years. I love this because it gives a tone of bliss abd it's very personal to you! Anyway from the poem itself I am so amazed that the flow is so smooth.Each line connects well and tthat's what makes a poem perfect. With all the restrictions it's veryddifficult. The rhyming is fantastic and not over played and you did well to keep it with the story. Overall you did a beautiful job! Edit: Also I loved the title because it shows the location of the poem and all the poem talks about hanging out. The location is key here because without it, the poem wouldn't make sense!