Comments : Your Promise

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This poem- You started out with so many emotions. This women seems to be in such denial about her love coming back. In the very first stanza you get the feeling that this guy has left her for good. But the title tells youdifferently. I really like that in a poem bbecause it really gets you thinking about what happens next. It pulls you in and that's what you want. Anyways. This person seems to stay so strong in the next few stanzas. But in the third stanza that's really where you start to understand what is going on. His death and it hits the reader hard. And throws in a lil twist because it's unexpected. Anyway the ending is great because that's where you write the most emotion. The tears flowing and those last two words strike a cord in your heart. You feel sorrow for the girl. You just want to hug her. Beautiful and emotional write dear. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    I love this poem because many women go through this every day and it's a sad way when that call or letter comes that says he's not coming home a true sad pieve but beautiful truly 5/5