Comments : Scarlet Wings & Charcoal Scars

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Holy Moly this is beautiful!!! Just beautiful!

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you so much Andrea!

  • 9 years ago

    by Hellon

    Ok...first of all it was long and...not the type of poem I would normally comment on because fantasy is not really my scene but...there was just something about this that pulled me in and yes...I did read it to the end..surprising myself :) It was extremely well written and that's what grabbed me in to start with and...just something held me there. I'm nominating this because...I would like others, who are perhaps more into this style to read and give you more feedback....I like it, just can't fully explain why...:)

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you so much for both reading to the end, especially because of it usually being out of your character! And even more so, thank you for your kind words, they make me very happy, and I'm glad that I managed to pull you in! I can relate to not being able to explain either, because I can't really explain how I wrote this piece myself, it sort of just happened, it was like I was in a trance -- dreaming even, while fully awake, and my fingers moving without guidance. It's really strange, and not what I write nor even how, but amazingly fun! Thanks again =)

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is wonderful I really love the use of imagery :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    O.o OMG this is an awesome write!!!!

    You've got chops!!!

    Beautiful word choice and flow....Epic!!