Your poem lacks the flow of rhymes, and it was a little bumpy when reading it. but keep up the writing, you have potential

It seems a bit cliche and personally I think a few of these statements are overused when speaking of things like these (take knight in shining armor for example). Personally I don't mind the lack of rhyme (although it does add great spice to a poem) and I like free verse poetry just as much as any other form, but I bet if you were to turn off the caps lock and add some of your own personal and unique thoughts on this it would turn out to be great. I can see that you are new here so this is a great start! PM Me anytime