There was much repetition! try and use your creativity.

The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect!

The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect!

The last line cleared it all. We all wonder that yes. But could use different phrase instead of "sometimes I wonder" every time. But the substance is perfect!

Great write.. We are all wonderers.

Em