Comments : Why

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Jason this is good yet pretty sad. We all deserve happiness and i believe that one day when we are least expecting it, it'll come to us.
    Yes, you may feel broken now and not want to love again but in time you will find someone who will mend it for you.

    but yet you left me all alone
    ^^
    I think this line would read better without the but, just a suggestion.

    Great write, Em