Mercy!! ...speechless!

I'm speechless lovely

Midnight is the beautiful time to write our real feelings,
Nice write &keep writing

Judges comments

First impression of this was that it is very LONG, But when you begin to read this piece you cannot stop until you reach the end. It is a great example of setting a mood and a scenario. The images each stanza conjure are fantastic. I love the references to emptiness and juxtaposing that with the stars in the sky. A really atmospheric and detailed piece. 10 points.

Oh my word. This poem is awesome, I am so glad I stumbled on it and didn't miss it.

It is long, but it reads faster than it looks like it would take. The flow passes really quick and the imagery and description is so animated and alive, that your interest in the poem remains high through out.

There is so much inside the poem, such sadness and loneliness and yet beauty all at the same time. I think you broke the poem up very well, in the right places.

I also think you have it a very interesting, fitting, and eye catching title.

Very unique, this is one amazing poem!