Thanks, how are the situations different? my e-mail is jello_baby13@hotmail.com if ya need to e-mail me too.

Great poem. Content ways at least. I don't see much of a rythem but I can relate where you come from. Overall I like the poem. Its not that bad. Keep up the good work.

Yea, i dont really have much of a rythem, i dont really work that much on rhyming, this one actually has some rhymes in it though, lol, my pomes are mainly free verse, and they jus what i feel at the moment. Thanks i have others if you wanna read them.

hi there =) such a nice poem here =)...
lotsa emotions carefully tucked in it... i can understand how u feel... well did u give it to ur parents?... well if not, i think i need to talk to them... tell them wussup =) sorry... thats my opinion .... since u asked for it =) but i know things will change in the end... dont give up... take care... muah

hope u visit mine =) ciao

OMG I AM SO MAD, I LEFT THE POEM WHERE THEY COULD READ IT AND WHEN I WOKE UP THE NEXT MORNING IT WAS IN THE TRASH CAN. I WAS LIKE WTF. I WAS SO MAD, WHAT DO I DO NOW

This makes me even more mad, my mom dont believe that i wrote it, she thinks that it is a song, see i knew that they wouldnt care, it makes me so mad. i dunno what to do. they jus dont get it.