Comments : Pastures

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Well this was a tearjerker and hit home with me. Paul I can't express how powerful this poem is and the elegance within makes is pretty with the nature tones and metaphors. The message is that of always searching for love and needing more but never realizing it's right in front of you.. that is how I took this piece.. truly a lovely write by you!

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    Wow Paul, this is a wonderful write yet so sad in the fact that I can completely relate to what I think you are trying to portray here.

    Many people will love the wrong kind of person for so long that their ability to love again is completely tainted.

    The metaphors you used are great. Em

  • 4 years ago

    by Em

    Wow Paul, this is a wonderful write yet so sad in the fact that I can completely relate to what I think you are trying to portray here.

    Many people will love the wrong kind of person for so long that their ability to love again is completely tainted.

    The metaphors you used are great. Em