A very interesting concept to this one.

I really liked how the whole thing read and the repeating of the 2nd stanza. The whole thing had a good flow to it.

Noone wants to be locked up whatever form it takes.

Keep it up! 5/5

I love the first paragraph a lot. I love the descriptive words you chose . They all made it seem like a storybook. I like how you dove deep into your emotions and put them on the poem . Thats really cool. So overall I really like the poem.

Robert, I loved the whole poem. For me, every stanza of your poem captivity is so captivating.

I'm intregied by this poem I couldn't help but look at life in another way it's enjoyable to read dark poems instead of love since dark poems are ingenious to read to inspire to write great work hun 5/5

-Bet

I'm intregied by this poem I couldn't help but look at life in another way it's enjoyable to read dark poems instead of love since dark poems are ingenious to read to inspire to write great work hun 5/5

-Bet

Robie, the imagery and description in this piece really work well. The rhyming and structure make it run so smoothly.

Great write, Em