Comments : I wish I didn't know better

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I really like the way your voice shines through here and you gave this piece a personality, more than likely your personality, without taking anything away from the story or the emotion. Speaking of which the emotion and conflict in this piece was penned spot on. Excellent write.

    • 11 years ago

      by Nikki

      Thank you :)

  • 11 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I love everything. ...might I make a tiny suggestion? In the end put "but" after "dammit" or "yet I still love the story Nikki

    • 11 years ago

      by Nikki

      Thank you i love the suggestion :)