Comments : Sweet Denial

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a great poem which sums up life! I love the contrast between the good and bad- how things happen but then tomorrow still comes and we have to get on with life.

    I also like your metaphors and descriptions, the dog chasing its tail for circles is my favourite!

    Many people will relate to the fear of love here, of what it can bring. Very honest poem. It is what it is.

    Nice job

    • 9 years ago

      by Jeff Weiner

      Thank you so much, its nice when people understand the back meanings and see what was projected.