Comments : Childhood Indoctrination

  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Yikes talk about a twist in the end I thought it was funny till I saw that last sentence it's still funny to me since my parents never did that but then again they let me do whatever I wanted with religion also I like the flow and how you were "talking" to your "mom" really nice from the flow to the rhyming 5/5 and no grammar mistakes that I saw

    -Bet

    • 10 years ago

      by ApostleApostate

      Thank you Joker Queen for your comments, I'm glad I got a reaction out of you :) and I'm happy that you've never had to go through something like this.

  • 10 years ago

    by Samaher

    Good ,can u please vote for my poem Allah