Keep your head up girl...aint no man worth the stress, I jsut figured that out...good poem...LiL One

No man is worth your life. ever. This poem seems really heartfelt. Good write. 5/5

marcella

*your gone*
should be
*you're gone*

* myside.*
TO
* my side.*

*would do*
TO
*would I do*

not your best and i feel you could have done better in expressing your loss but overall it was a great poem that was honest.

good job
~yellowfeverlime