Awe this is so beautiful, you really have a way with words, I really enjoyed reading this, BRAVO

Enjoyed reading this, you were able to put so many emotions in your work!. great piece ..

cheers

There is a lot of wonderful emotion and imagery in this piece. I don't think I have read anything from you that can truly be described as happy, but you do sadness best, and even though there is love and peace in happiness within this piece the ending still hits as sad and I think you have done that well. The piece feels a little long like you are just trailing on, but it feels so personal that I can't really not like it or say there is any less skill or beauty because of such.

Well written. I really enjoyed reading this.