See... This one is much better and you came back with your descriptions and metaphors, it does make such a difference to a poem!

This was really open and I think there was a lot if insecurity between the lines, probably the fear of being hurt, of being broken. I admire that honesty.

I think the safety it holds within the idea of a Holy land is quite unique, yet people can relate to this if they have safety within their religion. Or, just in that place they go to where they hide, and become closed off to the world, this then becomes their holy land because they do not let anyone else in it. It becomes safe.

Great use of the prompts.
Well done