Comments : The Next Day

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Strong wording in the poem, quite raw as to what life is, and what we take from it, It is so true that we often spend far too much time seeking the truth, and we never really think of what that truth might be, because sometimes when we get it, we don't like it and wish we never heard/knew it.

    I like where you took this poem.

    Good work,.