Comments : Poet's Wisdom

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    You were right when we were talking and you said your pieces for the contest weren't really you. This one is lacking your usual flair; however, one line stood out to me and really left me going wow, that was great, phenomenal line:

    "Wisdom weaved in ink"

    great write.

  • 9 years ago

    by SpartanOdyssee

    Nicely written this piece of yours.

    The message perfectly in line with it's artistic side!

    Kudo's!:)

  • 9 years ago

    by joseph santacruz

    Its good. I like the rhyming words. I have been told rhyme is so outI cant help it ;cuz I am "rhyminally insane"Doctor Seuss was a talented white rapper.

  • 9 years ago

    by Euphanasia

    Awesome write!