Comments : Look deep into my eyes, for I have a story to tell.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Love the detail in this, it is truly dark.

    There is imagery aplenty throughout and it holds your attention from start to finish.

    my only gripe is the layout.
    In my humble opinion with a rejig and minor edit it would appear better and you will be more likely to get more comments.

    • 11 years ago

      by Tori Pipes

      Thank you Darren for the feed back. i love the feed back on everything i write. hearing different peoples perspectives helps me to improve majorly

  • 11 years ago

    by Chris Jackson

    This is beauty.