This is such a great little poem, I like the flow to it, I picked up a small beat/rhythm here and also a few subtle rhymes throughout which worked really well.

I liked the depth the poem held as well, straight away I thought it was the type of poem where the reader already has a certain someone in their mind that they can relate these words to.

Great title choice, blends well with the poem, and doesn't stray from the content.

Nice work.

Loved it....short but great!!