Comments : Sorry

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello

    I like this piece as a whole and I particularly like the last, powerful line.

    "Can you hear what I'm trying to say?
    I miss 'us' " - excellent.

    A sad poem, well written.
    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Well expressed.

  • 9 years ago

    by Senfuka Hassan

    With more interest in this poetry game, u can do better! This is good, I have enjoyed.

    • 6 years ago

      by Yatubeera Resty

      Am most surprised you did read and comment my friend.. thank you..
      Life denies me chance to write sometimes but I shall surely reconsider...