Comments : Careless Time

  • 6 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very sad. I can almost relate too. Well done.

    Natalie

  • 6 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Truth acknowledged is hope reached for. Lesson learned, saves a future blame.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love the last line - so powerful. Sad, well written piece. Excellent.

  • 5 years ago

    by Francis Njoroge

    So awesome

  • 9 months ago

    by Ziad Dib Jreige

    Beautifully penned.

    A self realisation, and a lesson learned.

    Thanks for sharing with us your honesty and genuineness, in those bitter yet beautiful rhymes.