by Beautiful Soul
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As poets we are our own worst critic. We never do know what people will say or if they will read our poems. The message is simple but I think every single person can relate to it. Awesome use of your name as well. Nominated. Well done |
by Sylvia
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Nice work with the form but for the acrostic, the title should be your name since that is what the "acrostic" spells. |
by Maple Tree
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You are correct Sylvia and thank you... :-) |
by Sylvia
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It does work well in that it does not sound forced, reads very natural and seems to express doubt from the writer wondering if people really do read or care what they write and that they, the writer, really does have something to say. |
by Maple Tree
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Thank you Sylvia and Beautiful Soul :-) |