Comments : Roses (double haiku)

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Ugh. This is wonderful! There are definitely two different stanzas here but they connect very well together. When you think about roses, there is always love involved. I also love that you put this in the nature category. You could say it's love but there is a lot of nature involved. The wording to me works well, for you stayed consistent with the theme of the poem and what you wanted to say. The rose is a love symbol. To me the first stanza sets up the second one well. The last line is the best one I feel. Even in death you will always have love. That's why people leave roses on the graves. To know you still care. No matter what. Beautiful write with lots of meaning.

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    LOVE the double haiku, love love love the double reference to roses......... flipping LOVE THIS PIECE!

    • 9 years ago

      by Darren

      LOVE that you read it Andrea

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Giggles... yeah I love it!