Comments : Though you were the one

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Strong flow, nice rhyming sequences throughout it.
    Again I'd break up the stanza's but other than that it's a beautifully worded poem that is real cute.
    You can see how much you care for this person, it totally shows in the words you have used here to express your feelings for them.

    • 9 years ago

      by Remy bailey

      Thank you I appreciate the advise also you reading my poem and I do really care for him,when I write poems it helps me when I'm sad .