This poem is so short, and yet quite fluent in stating a simple moment in time about that emotion of feeling lost within ourselves about love, or about someone else who we are taking a chance on.

The use of the Alice in wonderland was unique, and I like how you made it your own, and played around with the order of the words, and made yourself into the Alice, and the wonderland to be the title of the poem worked well too.

A poem many can relate to, and because of the shortness of the poem, it hits with an impact of thought instead of being over-filled with emotions and descriptions!

Nice work.