Comments : PROM

  • 11 years ago

    by ShadowsEmber

    This is really sad but true as well. A lot of times, people cannot see their worth.

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love how well you penned this It is amazing and beautiful despite its heartbreaking quality. So many girls feel and relate to this. SO many girls in todays world know exactly how this feels and the only thing they want is to feel beautiful or know that someone else out there sees that beauty. There is such literary merit to this piece, even with the topic of choice. I love the word choice and the style you chose. I love that you didn't really worry about format which gave it a perfect flow.

    excellently penned.