I like the way you used the very first sentence to set the scene for this piece and then you repeated that sentence throughout the rest of the piece. Also the second stanza not being formatted the way the other three are gives it just the power it needed to keep up with the piece and still stand out leaving such a beautiful imprint on the minds of the audience members. Your voice is elegantly shining here - I love the feel that created braided nicely within the imagery. Great piece, so glad you added it to the comment thread!