Comments : New Beginnings

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    This is one simply beautiful poem.I read it before once and didn't pay much attention but now, the second time that I read it....it's beautiful.

    The way you have described this diary of your life is way too good.I love this poem especially these lines :

    "Life's diary closely resembling a mishmash of clipping carefully cut and pasted to resemble some surreal semblance of abstract thoughts borrowed from other's books."

    This poem is just perfect and very well written.This poem definitely goes in my favourite poems list.
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    What a beautiful write. This also can be interpreted in a lot of ways. I believe the first part you are talking about being someone you are not and idolizing someone, copy and pasting for someone. You listened to them and lived your life by them. Next stanza holds a realization that you have your own life and you can write your own chapter without anyone's consent. You have broken free and found your own path in this life. And this is definitely your life to live your own way. 5/5