Comments : My Truths... (Dodoitsu V's Acrostic)

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Love this!

    A mix of formed poetry, where the syllables count the love between the two characters!

    Nice one!

    Can't believe you do not write more often!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Agree with saffie, such a wonderful write full of love and happiness. Through your eyes you have admiration for this person, who seems to be your partner. You want them to love you forever, and that in itself is true love. Each kiss is the growth of something new, a spark that has never felt your hearts. The mixing of forms is great because it pushes you to the limit of syllable counts, you impacted the reader well with your words and attention to the emotion you grow within. Wonderful write

  • 5 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    Thank you both :)