I love this one Zoei, it is sweet. The word choice is unique, especially with your usual style. I like the way your voice is here, it is amazingly clear and as I said before sweet. - Wait a minute, who are you and what have you done to Zoei?!?!?!

Anyway, awesome write.

I like the wording of this poem, it holds a lot of power within it as well as the emotion of longing for that someone/something.

great title choice too, and I like how you made it reality's dream, then MY dream, this worked well.

Nice job.

Just beautiful!

Small elegance this week by ShadowsEmber!!

The wording of love captured in a simple and yet effective format!

The feelings are poured out: Perhaps a new love.. A dream turning into reality can bring such joy and then to craft it into a poem is beautifully displayed in this piece.

I was captivated by this piece for its elegance, graceful simplicity and lovely word display!

Very pretty piece this week by ShadowsEmber!