by Colm
I thought this poem had a great flow and pacing: It kept me interested and was well penned. The rhyme wasn't forced and I liked the tone. However, for me the last 2 lines weren't the best: 'I found me' seems cliché and was a disappointing note to leave the poem on. Overall though a good effort and keep it up! |
by Eric T Jones
Thank you Colm for your honesty as well as reading my poem. I'll keep trying. |