Every stanza contained a line that stood out to me. It was very hard hitting. Thanks for sharing!

Is that ,. thing at the end of your first stanza there on purpose? The lines I liked the most were "waves without sea, salt, and tragedy." Also, "I seek your voice in my skin." I feel there might be mixed feelings about the directed audience of this poem; this person you're directing it to. Its like you care for them, but dont want them getting hurt? There's an air of mystery around this that adds a lot to the overall feel.

I dont have any helpful critiques, as i think its perfect as it is!

-Tarnish

Loving your poems my friend.. :)