Comments : For You

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I don't get why this hasn't been commented on yet?!?!

    This poem is just WOW.

    I love the language you used and the way you presented it makes the reader (well me anyway) read it slowly which just add's to the gravity of the write overall.

    I felt emmersed in it almost straight away, really excellent writing :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I agree with Ben - this is an excellent piece written wonderfully.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is excellent.
    The way it read so smooth and the words you used.