Comments : Succumb to Iniquity

  • 11 years ago

    by Greeter

    Interesting poem,

    The first stanza created an image of a river, and the single tear falling into its stream... I'm not quiet sure what this poem is about but it has a mysterious and haunting tone attach to it.

    on this line:

    Golden mist is rises from the stream,

    ^ is it "is risen" or just "rises"?

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