What a gorgeous piece!Love the third stanza.

Another awesome write Karla... that is impossible to read only once. My fav stanza is the first especially this line:

"as we theoretically touch
each other with our dark haired minds."

And the last stanza- this part:

"all i want is to see
(IS?)the house burning to the ground
as i find myself in hell and heaven
again.
and yes, it is so good."

Brilliant poetry :)

So as I'm reading this I tell myself WOW, I am going to leave a nice, proper comment..

and then I get to the comment section and HAVE NOTHING to say because 'WOW' is all that comes to mind, and is all that I can say. This is amazing.

I will say I laughed at the bra part, and that is quite possibly one of my FAVORITE parts of my day ;)

Beautiful poem!

Awesome write Karla

Judging Comment;

This piece is a little on the lengthy side but it keeps the reader engaged fully. It has descriptions that blew me away and a voice that is so unique within not only her writing but so many of the others here. The style she chose was perfect for this piece and it truly got the point across in a remarkable way.