Interesting piece, I have single suggestion for you, check this out:

~To you a choice was given;
to sit

or

to stand~

^^^looks much smoother.

Interesting piece, I have single suggestion for you, check this out:

~To you a choice was given;
to sit

or

to stand~

^^^looks much smoother.

Interesting piece, I have single suggestion for you, check this out:

~To you a choice was given;
to sit

or

to stand~

^^^looks much smoother.

Just fly great piece , :)

In the second stanza, dessert should be desert.

This poem holds an open emotion of sadness within. I like how you opened up this poem with a choice, to sit or stand, but they chose to sit, and in that became silent in your life. Just like everyone you knew that pretended to be nice. This seems to be a poem about standing up for what is wrong, or having a friend stand up for your rights but... They didn't. The metaphor here is wonderful. I like this because sadness reigns throughout. 5/5

Dessert sounds much better. Now I'm hungry.

Exceptional.

Exceptional.

Exceptional.

Exceptional.

Exceptional.

Wow this is a great poem with such sadness that many people can relate to.

Em