Good poem, a couple spelling errors, but otherwise a very nic epiece with good use of words. Check out mine if you ahve teh chance.

That was great. I can see where you are coming from. If you ever need to talk just email me.

Much Love
Kelleigh

Hey I liked the poem, but it sort of confused me. It says that the narrator now knows that the guy didn't love her all along. But at the end, she says that she is sorry for making him feel bad. Who wronged who? Or maybe that is a bit too simple an analysis. Anyways, I liked your poem. However, there are two errors in these two lines ,"And more tears is running down my cheek
Now I'm cry until I can't cry anymore"
it should be tears are, because tears is plural, and it should be I cry, because well, iono I don't think I'm cry makes a lot of sense.

Yes, Very heart-breaking, but beautifully written poem.

Besides the errors that Sean mentioned... I beleive you meant through the window (not trough).

and the cry error could be fixed one of two ways: I cry...or I'm crying. I think either one fits just as well.

You have a wonderful way of expressing your feelings, though. Keep up the good work!

Very good poem. You're a great writer! :) Keep it up!

~Grace

Wow that's really sad...you have a great way with words....this piece was awesome

Wow.... that's the only word I can think of at the moment after reading that OoOo wow!!! Dfinitly well worth a 5!!!!

Hey! Its me, remember me?
I read your poem to me it really nice, but sad to. Its good and keep up the good work!

Awsome work. im Tanarays friend and noticed you wanted her to check out ur poems, so i did instead. good job

hey, ur poems are really good!! Thanks for commenting on mine i appreciate it =)
keep up the good writing!

hey hey,,, thanks for reading my poem....but omg i should not have read this poem i am sooo easily upsetted right no so now i am crying so many blood tears!! good work!!!

that was brillaint omg it was amazing
5 out of 5
nice work xxxxxxx

amazing poem !!! keep up the good work !

Depressing, infact this happened to me. But yeah apparently I got help. I really wonder what would've happened if I died...
Nice work. 5/5

i would add some punctuation to help the reader decipher how to read the poem. It's very hard to understand w/o any punctuation.

Wow...that was great....but really hon men aren't worth dying for if this is how you really felt Youll one day find your special star:) Always remember guys are like the stars in the sky there are millions of them out there but only one will make your hopes and dreams come true...MuchLove JJ

Wow, September Spring u have a ton of talent! This was awesome, I especially liked this one from all your poems, and i liked the line about looking out the window and seeing the moon. Very very good, 5-5 for sure.
Ha det bra,
SatuzKa

Wow, you are a very talented poem I love your work well done on all your poems they are fantastic keep it up xxx

Is this true?
Anyways..keep up the good work!
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This was BEAUTIFULLY written, it was really sad tho, but you did a great job, Loved it