Comments : One Among The Star...

  • 5 years ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    Wow! That is an excellent piece! You had me hooked from the start. My favorite stanza in this poem is here:

    "Good or bad,smiles or tears-everything happens for a reason,
    Just learn to accept things the way they are into all season.
    We all have been sent here with a best use by and expiry date,
    start living your life for a tomorrow may not be on your plate."

    We all have a best use by date! Love how you made this feel like anyone can relate! Great job! 5/5

    *~BrittBratt~*

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas

  • 5 years ago

    by I am

    Hye kumar
    I really like your poems, its really true what have u written. I was in depression last from some years but this difficult time teach me lot.
    Nicely written
    Merry Christmas