Comments : Santa's Sprit

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love this piece, it is simple and kinda humorous about the holidays. I really like how short this is and yet how awesome. Though I think your third line needs the word "it" between or and may because you did may and be as seperate entities instead of maybe. (I'm not sure I explained that very well... I'm sorry) Great piece though