Oh mercy I'm speechless! Oh I love this! I do apologize for this short comment, but I'm truley speechless! Wow!

I really enjoy the way you penned this piece. My only true critique is the capitalization of every single line it distracts the reader and puts emphasis in places it doesn't really fit - especially in a piece as lengthy as this. Very well penned and awesome us of word choice/imagery! Very well done!