Comments : Hunted

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Hun, so many people understand this really they do - even me. You wrote it very well but you also need to remember that you are never alone. Words will always be there for you. I will always be there for you. Victoria, megan, Jack and allie are always going to be there for you... I say victoria,... but im not so sure anymore.

    As for the piece itself the style is quite different from your usual pieces though I enjoyed it. Your imagery is spot on and your voice is crystal clear. I love love love love love the word choice in this one.

    Great piece.

    • 7 years ago

      by Monsieur Lefevre

      Thank you Hun. It was really difficult writing this because while I was writing the poem, the actual things in the poem started happening again. Nickelback, Linkin Park, and Evanescence helped me through it though.

      And as for Victoria, she is no longer apart of my life anymore. And for that I am glad.

      Thank you for liking my poem and yes I understand that there are people out there to help me :) Especially you.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yes, I can relate to this one as many can, I'm sure. Another skilfully crafted piece.