Comments : Sunset

  • 9 years ago

    by Mello193

    This was awesome. great read

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Indeed awesome :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi Adam,

    I like the setting the couplets spread out. This makes this reader take each one and process it at a relaxed speed.

    The rhyme throughout is not imposing, rather scattered to bring home certain points.

    The imagery is clear and paints this moonlit couple as a silhouette, but cleverly, the sun is the metaphor for hope.

    Well done,


  • 7 years ago

    by Em


    This is a really well thought out piece that grabs my attention because of the short, sharp couplets. The rhyme and flow fit like a glove too.