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This was awesome. great read
Indeed awesome :)
by Mr. Darcy
I like the setting the couplets spread out. This makes this reader take each one and process it at a relaxed speed.
The rhyme throughout is not imposing, rather scattered to bring home certain points.
The imagery is clear and paints this moonlit couple as a silhouette, but cleverly, the sun is the metaphor for hope.
This is a really well thought out piece that grabs my attention because of the short, sharp couplets. The rhyme and flow fit like a glove too.