Hi there..

I smiled upon reading your poem..
I can relate to it..

Love... ;)

This was beautiful. very romantic. i like how you used benevolence instead of malevolence. either word changes the ending to this piece immensely.

"to fertilize
to grow
to rise above
intertwined by vines
in you, my love".

This was my favorite stanza.

the subtle references in this piece were pleasant to read. i appreciate how clever your writing has become.

The greatest sacrifice was you.