Really, I've been fairly brutally honest tonight, and I have to say this is the best thing I've read so far. "I try to drown my demons, yet they know how to swim" that line in itself spoke volumes to me. Really great job man, very impressed. 5/5 obviously.

The darkness will stay,
For each and every day.
Honestly I felt like these either needed to be longer or just weren't needed. But I loved the opening, that had to be my favorite part. Loved the statement showing that turning into a monster just doesn't happen over night but slowly over time from each blow you get. I really enjoyed reading this. Hope to see more from you. 5/5