Comments : Art is Suicide

  • 7 years ago

    by Eric Ngobeni

    Excellent

  • 7 years ago

    by GB

    Congratulations.
    You are very gifted writer, your style and use of imagery are pretty distinguished and actually I'm looking forward to see you writing other colors of poetry. All the best.

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this poem was really moving and deep. The imagery you created was vivid.

    There are specific parts of the poem that I absolutely loved such as:
    "They promised us,
    in honeyed words that showered us"

    ^^ I love the idea of honeyed words

    "I've been killing myself,
    cut open my stomach and lungs,
    and with my blood I've painted silhouettes
    of everything I ever was and everything I will ever be"

    ^^ This part was dark and graphic, and though the thought of blood makes me sick, I like the imagery of painting silhouettes with blood. It's twisted but makes a huge impact within this poem.

    Congratulations and well done! 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Your words are so touching, they move mountains my sweet.... Congratulations

  • 3 days ago

    by Evi

    I got goosebumps !!!