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by Eric Ngobeni
You are very gifted writer, your style and use of imagery are pretty distinguished and actually I'm looking forward to see you writing other colors of poetry. All the best.
Wow... this poem was really moving and deep. The imagery you created was vivid.
There are specific parts of the poem that I absolutely loved such as:
"They promised us,
in honeyed words that showered us"
^^ I love the idea of honeyed words
"I've been killing myself,
cut open my stomach and lungs,
and with my blood I've painted silhouettes
of everything I ever was and everything I will ever be"
^^ This part was dark and graphic, and though the thought of blood makes me sick, I like the imagery of painting silhouettes with blood. It's twisted but makes a huge impact within this poem.
Congratulations and well done! 5/5
by Maple Tree
Your words are so touching, they move mountains my sweet.... Congratulations
I got goosebumps !!!