The title itself made me fall in love with the poem. How you painted your sadness across the piece in such metaphors that gave the reader a feeling of belonging I dont know to what exactly but I felt like missing someone, nostalgia...

Am lost for words right now, and just overwhelmed with it!

Great piece xx

This is really beautiful Dashiel. :). We all go through pain of a lost of a loved one or friend, and here I feel like it is both. I love how in a lot of your poems, you seem to put yourself in the eyes of a flower. or you could even say that you become the flower yourself and it is always seems like it is the main character but it is not, it seems like you always put yourself as the second character and the main character is the one who you have lost. THe flowers are always wilting here. and you feel like it is always your fault that you lost this person and in turn you make the flowers seem like they are depressed as well, which is what I love about your poems, they make you feel everything. I love the title as well, as it seems like you are the flower I feel you are saying that you will never love again. Beautiful poem though. 5/5

What a great end and what a beautifully written poem. Your words seem to flow effortlessly. Very talented writer. Added to my favourites!