Comments : Horizons Hope

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is another great effort from a challenge, you can do these so well and you really do make the most of the prompt and make it seem effortless to create something great from it.

    I loved the scenery in this one and how it really creates such vivid imagery for the reader. It has a beautiful tone to it, and the title is very eye catching and fitting to the poem itself.

    I especially like the line of the shadow of your heart.
    I challenge you to take this prompt alone, and make more about it. Make that a new prompt for a new poem, I think it such a powerful idea to use. Very creative.

    Nice work.

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    The title definitely caught my eye with this one, great job. I love the imagery you have in this and the way the formatting suits your tone perfectly. I wish I had been able to stay more up to date reading everyone's work, I would have loved to nominate this - it's amazing.

    I especially enjoyed:

    I watch the shadow of my heart
    skim over ice cream waves
    and disappear.

    Wonderful write.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The first four lines in this piece are beautiful. Lovely flow and imagery throughout as usual, Cassie. Wonderful.
    Take care,
    Ben