Beautiful write !!!!!

"Almost succumbing to the light" -
Interesting and original, rather than succumbing to the mandatory dark.

It is quiet stunning piece. You use opposite elements in the unique ways.

Wow, creative work! I love the connection between the dark shades beneath the eyes, to the shades under a tree. Beautiful comparison.

I like the loyalty throughout this poem, where the relationship of mother and daughter seems strong and bonded, and here is a daughter saying that their mother is their solace, their place of comfort and safety.

Lovely work.